I finished my sonnet! Since I'm in the library right now, and won't get home until much later, and I have tons of homework, I need to write the sonnet down in a place I can access later and just copy and paste it... so that means that all my lovely blog readers get to read my sonnet first. It turned out pretty well. I had to revise a lot of it quite a few times. There are only a few things in there that are specific to us. A lot of it has to do with love in general so I feel a lot of people can relate to it.... yeah. So, please no criticism. I feel that everything I write is always rubbish so this was an attempt to be more laid back about the whole thing in general...
So enjoy my rubbish:
It Has Been Said:
Lovers find each other within their selves.
Though separate hearts, their bond makes them one.
Through the depths of Us we have fought and delved;
The hunt for you within myself is done.
For my orphaned heart found shelter in you;
You are the home for which I think and plan.
I gladly uproot: our dreams to pursue.
Newly family: together we band.
Whateve' the distance is never too far.
With mutual affection so binding,
Many would envy a true love like ours.
For our love's high as Heav'n's height. Where shining
Orion, in the stars high up above,
Silently watches and protects our love.
When you hate your friend rsquo s new friend
1 month ago
2 Remarks:
Fabulous. I got little goosebumps from relating so much. (And yes, I'm serious, I did!)
i absolutely love your first stanza! so good!
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